WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »katanagirl1 wrote: »Yeah, to be honest I don't remember much of High Isle dialogue and story wise (I did enjoy Galen though and it managed to keep me quite focused). I also wasn't a fan of that old woman investigator lady, every time I interacted with her it felt so odd and random. Also for the first time I hated the Lady Laurent and Stibbon's quest.... it made me uncomfortable, which was sad since that's usually a small highlight of some chapters.
Yes, that was horrid. Actually I found the whole chapter horrid. The stupid flirting you could not stop (by that old lady and Jakarn), the druid artifact quest in Llanshara. I'm not against "romance" or "adult" themes in general, but it felt horribly cheap and obtrusive. Badly written. And the whole chapter was overfraught with that.ESO dialogue is increasingly filled with what feels like cheap slapstick comedy and innuendo.
I agree 100%, sadly!WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »This, this, this. It’s worse when it’s something awkward *cough*Fate’s Proxy*cough*, ‘Comrade’ and ‘Adept’ weren’t too bad, but when everyone’s calling me ‘Friend’ it sounds like they know they’re supposed to know my name but forgot it, or they just met me even when I’ve been questing on their behalf for some time.
"Hero" mostly makes me cringe. I can understand it if you actually just saved a character's life and they're the emotional type, but otherwise it sounds ridiculous.
Titles as placeholders in lieu of character names don’t bother me. Creepy old lecherous ladies that hit on my female toon constantly do.
Creepy lecherous guys too....
While we’re on the subject I’m still mad at what they did with Raz in Galen. 😐 NOT COOL ZOS! I saw Sound of Freedom and now I want to leave the room every time I come across him.
katanagirl1 wrote: »I just didn’t like it because Raz has always been a ladies man. Then out of left field this. Doesn’t make sense.
WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »katanagirl1 wrote: »I just didn’t like it because Raz has always been a ladies man. Then out of left field this. Doesn’t make sense.
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WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »Both are objectionable from a lore standpoint, but not quite to the point that I want to drop the character into a volcano.
And that's the type of thing that happens when story creators come and go and are replaced with a (slowly?) revolving door of new writers. Sometimes the original concept of characters is lost, or is modified by the nuances with which the new copy writers view life.
WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »Both are objectionable from a lore standpoint, but not quite to the point that I want to drop the character into a volcano.
I would have already thrown him into a volcano before I find him extremely annoying.And that's the type of thing that happens when story creators come and go and are replaced with a (slowly?) revolving door of new writers. Sometimes the original concept of characters is lost, or is modified by the nuances with which the new copy writers view life.
I don't think it's unavoidable. Even UESP has a page for every single NPC in the game, including the story of the quests they were involved in and all their dialogue. If taken seriously, you would check these things for a returning character before you write new dialogue for them, so you have a good idea of who they are and what they usually do and say. Of course there can still be subtle differences in tone, but what happened to Razum-dar and Naryu were very obvious mistakes.
UESP shouldn't even be needed. Any company managing any kind of artistic/creative content should have procedures in place to ensure that a suitable handover occurs between whoever creates the content and their successors. In other words: you don't just show the new people to their chairs and say "write this NPC's story for the next chapter", obviously you'd need to set some ground rules for what the NPC can/cannot say and do.WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »Both are objectionable from a lore standpoint, but not quite to the point that I want to drop the character into a volcano.
I would have already thrown him into a volcano before I find him extremely annoying.And that's the type of thing that happens when story creators come and go and are replaced with a (slowly?) revolving door of new writers. Sometimes the original concept of characters is lost, or is modified by the nuances with which the new copy writers view life.
I don't think it's unavoidable. Even UESP has a page for every single NPC in the game, including the story of the quests they were involved in and all their dialogue. If taken seriously, you would check these things for a returning character before you write new dialogue for them, so you have a good idea of who they are and what they usually do and say. Of course there can still be subtle differences in tone, but what happened to Razum-dar and Naryu were very obvious mistakes.
katanagirl1 wrote: »In the base game, Raz was witty, funny, and charming. In Summerset he seemed confused. In that quest in High Isle he was sort of back to his old self, but then that comment about a sudden change in preference for partners.
He used to be one of my favorite characters but that ruined it for me.
UESP shouldn't even be needed. Any company managing any kind of artistic/creative content should have procedures in place to ensure that a suitable handover occurs between whoever creates the content and their successors. In other words: you don't just show the new people to their chairs and say "write this NPC's story for the next chapter", obviously you'd need to set some ground rules for what the NPC can/cannot say and do.
I know, and I agree, sorry to give the impression I misunderstood you.UESP shouldn't even be needed. Any company managing any kind of artistic/creative content should have procedures in place to ensure that a suitable handover occurs between whoever creates the content and their successors. In other words: you don't just show the new people to their chairs and say "write this NPC's story for the next chapter", obviously you'd need to set some ground rules for what the NPC can/cannot say and do.
I didn't mean that ZOS should use UESP, I just wanted to point out that even an amateur project made by people in their freetime manages to keep track of every single npc so thoroughly - so a company whose job it is to write these stories should even more so be able to do that. Which makes it even more astonishing how often ZOS fails at that and gets returning characters completely wrong.
UESP shouldn't even be needed. Any company managing any kind of artistic/creative content should have procedures in place to ensure that a suitable handover occurs between whoever creates the content and their successors. In other words: you don't just show the new people to their chairs and say "write this NPC's story for the next chapter", obviously you'd need to set some ground rules for what the NPC can/cannot say and do.
I didn't mean that ZOS should use UESP, I just wanted to point out that even an amateur project made by people in their freetime manages to keep track of every single npc so thoroughly - so a company whose job it is to write these stories should even more so be able to do that. Which makes it even more astonishing how often ZOS fails at that and gets returning characters completely wrong.
That was the point I was trying to make earlier (I guess I didn't phrase it properly): my point is that staff handovers and transfers of information from old to new staff should make it easy to keep track of NPC nuances.UESP shouldn't even be needed. Any company managing any kind of artistic/creative content should have procedures in place to ensure that a suitable handover occurs between whoever creates the content and their successors. In other words: you don't just show the new people to their chairs and say "write this NPC's story for the next chapter", obviously you'd need to set some ground rules for what the NPC can/cannot say and do.
I didn't mean that ZOS should use UESP, I just wanted to point out that even an amateur project made by people in their freetime manages to keep track of every single npc so thoroughly - so a company whose job it is to write these stories should even more so be able to do that. Which makes it even more astonishing how often ZOS fails at that and gets returning characters completely wrong.
Look how many Loremasters they've gone through. Hard to keep track of NPC nuances when the ones overseeing story development are new to it themselves.
I know, and I agree, sorry to give the impression I misunderstood you.
Look how many Loremasters they've gone through. Hard to keep track of NPC nuances when the ones overseeing story development are new to it themselves.
And when you look at how characters who gave their lives to save Tamriel in the main story are shockingly brought back to life as if nothing happened to promote new DLC
Not sure how much the dialogues in the translation I played differ, but I found nothing witty in him. He seemed very full of himself (like "Oh, this one is so handsome, smart and charming! Everyone loves this one!") while being of average intelligence at most.
"You contact agent Fistalle on the east side of town. This one pads around her house. Then, we meet to discuss her report. Too bad Raz is so handsome, yes? He would get noticed."
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Life is short. If you have not made love recently, please, put down this book, and take care of that with all haste. Find a wanton lass or a frisky lad, or several, in whatever combination your wise loins direct, and do not under any circumstances play hard to get. Our struggle against the colossal forces of oppression can wait.
WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »Can you give an example?
WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »Yes, if Raz were in his 40’s (or the Khajiiti equivalent), one could maybe fudge it and say that someone ten years his junior was a ‘boy’ and still have both parties be adults, but he’s not.
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WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »Can you give an example?
It's hard to find a quote as there's nothing like UESP in my language. But I can certainly tell you that in that translation he often remarks how irresistible women would find him and how handsome he was (basically all the time), and it does not come across as a excuse or joke, like in that quest with Fistalle.
Although him being easily recognizable because of his appearance leads to another question: Why choose someone so distinctive looking as a spy? And why not someone who could magically alter their appearance at any time, I'm certain there are skilled Altmer mages in the Dominion who can both fight and are masters of illusion magic? Wouldn't that make much more sense?
There's even a crown store pet that has a description to Razum-dar fathering kids everywhere and leaving them:
https://en.uesp.net/wiki/Online:Ja'khajiit_Raz
"Sweet young things like to give this one kittens as keepsakes," says Eye of the Queen Razum-dar, "but raising a pet is not consistent with Raz's romantic but itinerant life of intrigue. Perhaps you could give cute Ja'khajiit a good home, yes?"
WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »Yes, if Raz were in his 40’s (or the Khajiiti equivalent), one could maybe fudge it and say that someone ten years his junior was a ‘boy’ and still have both parties be adults, but he’s not.
How old is he, by the way? I find it hard to estimate, because, you know, he's a cat All I know is he makes many remarks about how he adventured with Ayrenn before she became queen, but does he ever give any date or something like that (like "5 years ago") or some event where we can estimate when it took place? Or do we know how old Ayrenn is?
WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »Then the best I can tell you is that some of the nuance seems to have been lost in translation. He’s got a bit of swagger in the English version, yes, but no more than is typical for a Khajiit.
WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »This one is easy however. Raz is in the Eyes because he and the Queen are adventuring buddies (from the time she ran away from home prepared for Praxis and Ceremoniarchy in her own fashion of independent study) he’s loyal to her and she trusts him. And he’s clever and sneaky, so a good spy. (And he does use illusion disguises occasionally, he gives you one later in that questline.)
WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »Cats aren’t Khajiit, even if the Alfiq look like them. Note also he says ‘pet’, not ‘child.’
WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »My best guess is that he’s around Ayrenn’s age, so mid-twenties at most.
Now you have me thinking about how much I dislike Naryu, haha. I used to think she was okay at least, but I felt like the little side quest with her in Necrom kind of focused more on all her not very great personality traits and I kind of want nothing to do with her after that.Makes me wonder how often that changes the overall perception of a character. There are many "fan favorites" I find totally obnoxious (including Naryu who seems horribly obtrusive, and Darien who comes across as slightly dumb and just, well, boring? Fennorian is okay, though).
WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »Cats aren’t Khajiit, even if the Alfiq look like them. Note also he says ‘pet’, not ‘child.’
He says "pet", but he also calls it "Ja'khajiit" (and that's also the official name of it) which is the Khajiit language's term for a Khajiit child.
WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »My best guess is that he’s around Ayrenn’s age, so mid-twenties at most.
So calling other men "boy" would still be possible in his age group.
WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »No, Jha’Khajiit specifically means kitten. And even humans will sometimes call their children ‘kitten’ as an endearment,
WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »that doesn’t make a housecat dressed up to look like Raz his child.
WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »Not in the context he’s using the word in, unless he’s referring to literal children, hence the objection. In that particular context, ‘a nice young druid man’ or even just ‘a nice druid man’ with no age qualifier would have been more appropriate - it would still be eyeroll-worthy for the aforementioned reasons, but not volcano-worthy.
Razum-dar said he was looking for a nice "druid boy". In some languages that might seem weird when you actually mean an adult man. I think this is what causes the whole issue.
Why would one assume Raz was looking for an adult man? Because that would make it seem more acceptable?
And I don't know about other languages but in English, an adult male saying that they were "looking to meet a nice boy" is a pretty clear statement of intention.
Razum-dar said he was looking for a nice "druid boy". In some languages that might seem weird when you actually mean an adult man. I think this is what causes the whole issue.
Why would one assume Raz was looking for an adult man? Because that would make it seem more acceptable? And I don't know about other languages but in English, an adult male saying that they were "looking to meet a nice boy" is a pretty clear statement of intention.
Something else I haven't seen mentioned yet is that "boy" is also a racial slur in some cultures. However, that doesn't seem to fit the context here.
WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »No, Jha’Khajiit specifically means kitten. And even humans will sometimes call their children ‘kitten’ as an endearment,
Is that common in the USA? Because here, no one does that.
Araneae6537 wrote: »WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »No, Jha’Khajiit specifically means kitten. And even humans will sometimes call their children ‘kitten’ as an endearment,
Is that common in the USA? Because here, no one does that.
Nooo, I’ve never heard that. Honestly, I think most people would think it weird, or even creepy, depending on the context.
It's actually fairly common in the area where I live: small girls are frequently called "kitten" by moms and grandmas (mostly). Here it's used as a special term for a young female relative. "Pet" is also used occasionally in the same manner.
Araneae6537 wrote: »WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »No, Jha’Khajiit specifically means kitten. And even humans will sometimes call their children ‘kitten’ as an endearment,
Is that common in the USA? Because here, no one does that.
Nooo, I’ve never heard that. Honestly, I think most people would think it weird, or even creepy, depending on the context.
It's actually fairly common in the area where I live: small girls are frequently called "kitten" by moms and grandmas (mostly). Here it's used as a special term for a young female relative. "Pet" is also used occasionally in the same manner.
Araneae6537 wrote: »WhiteCoatSyndrome wrote: »No, Jha’Khajiit specifically means kitten. And even humans will sometimes call their children ‘kitten’ as an endearment,
Is that common in the USA? Because here, no one does that.
Nooo, I’ve never heard that. Honestly, I think most people would think it weird, or even creepy, depending on the context.
It's actually fairly common in the area where I live: small girls are frequently called "kitten" by moms and grandmas (mostly). Here it's used as a special term for a young female relative. "Pet" is also used occasionally in the same manner.
It's not just associating girls with cats. A Female Youth is referred as "Kitten" while Male Youths are "Pup". Essentially Girls are Cats and Boys are Dogs.