However, some constructive criticism if it isn't a ***-post:
-Your pacing was rather slow, seems there were several instances where you were at a loss as to what to say.
-Taking it in one shot was interesting, but cuts allow you to at least add variety with your intonations, as well as letting you try different things without having to redo the entire thing over.
-The screen was way too static for any kind of comedic effect, perhaps use video editing software?
-I have no idea wtf I am talking about.