Your first link, increased CC doesn't work for me so no comment. However, for your second.. I'm a Dunmer dual-wield DK and can give you my thoughts on what you have for the PvE dps build you've linked.
- Your bar is dominated by single target skills. If you want to solo/farm then you need some AoE. I would suggest you re-work the entire bar; that's not meant to be a flame it is just my honest, experienced, thoughts on it.
Here is what I would suggest, and what I run currently (35th).
http://www.esohead.com/calculator/skills#mzmzt0MMc9cmwE8ugIa8uvZT8w2Ct8uzeN8uEI18umHI85ot7Hrsg16MwUlN6MwYle6zwYl28E7DrzmY6LzVS6MuciH6zuchq8l7NLzoC6rzkA6rzky6MuvVD6MuvVJ8zk7pzvKVv6MvKVB6zvKVD6MvKVO8zf7zzNbo8zu7zzHfYE6zHfZd8zG7zzHQ3F8zI7zzJIoX6zJIkL8zN7zzJZcY8zA7zzKpUN8zL7zzK4EX (crazy long link)