Hi Zos,
Just wanted to first say thanks for the great work and effort - always appreciated.
I have noticed something which I hope you would be willing to pass on to the folk that script the story dialog.
The player responses need some work I feel to make the story flow better.
Currently alot of the time the player repeats what the quest giver says e.g.
You need to go to location X and do Y.
Responses: I'll go to X and do Y.
One does not really talk like that and it would help a bit with the immersion (XD sorry) - if the response was a little more realistic.
Response:
"Alright. You get to safety and I'll take care of this!" or
Response:
"[Villian Name] will rue the day [he/she/it] met me - mark my word- now get out of here!"
See where I'm going with this?
Please don't see this as a criticism just an observation
"One must still have chaos in oneself to be able to give birth to a dancing star."
~ Friedrich Nietzsche